Anyone care to review?

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John Dodds
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:25 pm Post

My short, A CROW AMONG THE STARLINGS (orignally published in Horror Express 3) is available free to download from my blog:
http://bonemachines.wordpress.com/2009/03/12/free-pdf-story-a-crow-among-the-starlings/

I would appreciate comments, let me know what you think.

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Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:15 am Post

Printed, and will read it after work. I don't think I have read any 'horror' books since Primary School, so it will be a little different for me.

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Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:56 am Post

Creepy story, John.

Evocative details.

Loaded into my iPod touch with no glitches, and I thought that photo looked great. Only thing was your link back to the blog was missing the second "s" in Wordpress.

Thanks for the shivers!
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A work in progress...

http://wayofcats.com/blog

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Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:43 am Post

Thanks for the kind comments – and Matt and Werebear, helpful typo spotting there!

I you're minded, a comment on my blog would be helpful. I am trying to drive traffic there.

John