Wed Jan 08, 2014 2:37 pm Post
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Thu Jan 09, 2014 2:53 am Post
PJS wrote:A page of praise from someone worried about hurting your feelings is worse than useless.
PJS wrote:try reading the work aloud to yourself, particularly any dialogue.
Thu Jan 09, 2014 2:57 am Post
Floss wrote:take a cold shower and leave It another fortnight.
Floss wrote:my general advise re external input is... unless you are just sending over a few pages to get a confidence boost that you,re not wasting your time i would avoid getting feedback until you,ve taken it as far as you can yourself.
Thu Jan 09, 2014 7:35 am Post
Thu Jan 16, 2014 10:48 pm Post
Fluff wrote:Keep my advice foremost in your thoughts, and your readers won't care a gorilla's fart for plot/grammar/literariness, etc., etc.
Wed Mar 05, 2014 6:56 pm Post
Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:17 pm Post
Raziel01 wrote:How is the second draft coming along? Have you found the story clicking into place more?
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