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Fri Jan 29, 2010 7:23 am Post

@gr Do you mean that the "I" is a good thing or a bad thing, or - like mary said - that it is simply unclear? Sorry, I'm afraid I'm a bit slow at times...

@mary Thank you :) Yes, perhaps I should have posted the first page instead of a chunk of the second chapter...Well, once I have it edited I might.

It seems as if everyone who has read Hemmingway either loves or hates his style. Personally, I feel so drawn into what he writes and can almost smell and see the picture he creates (consider Fiesta) that I love it.
The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys.
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