Sat May 26, 2012 6:49 pm Post
Mon May 28, 2012 7:40 pm Post
SConstance wrote:I would appreciate some critique, the good, the bad and the ugly. I know my writing isn't perfect but I'd like to know what other writers see that I don't. New eyes and such.
SConstance wrote:The sound of a crack of a whip
SConstance wrote:and a shrill feminine scream
SConstance wrote:The lowest floor of the basement was, of course, an imprisonment area...
SConstance wrote:Soon, my eyes raised up a bit to the person that was somewhat carrying me around and it was a largely-muscled and bald dark-skinned man wearing what seemed to be the remains of a canvas sleeveless shirt, the chains attached to the manacles slung over his left shoulder. I was not being dragged about long before the man stopped and turned, grabbing me around the throat with one massive hand and pressing me back against a wooden pole that was at least the size of my waist. His other hand lifted the chains attached to the manacles up to a hook that was a good three feet above my fingertips and attached them to a clasp there
Mon May 28, 2012 7:53 pm Post
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Tue May 29, 2012 6:38 pm Post
pigfender wrote:Jaysen wrote:I'm really really not qualified.
Oh, but the cat is?
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