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Or better still... "...from what had been happy thoughts of a quick honky-tonk, right there on the soft moss cushioned, forest floor."Floss wrote:snapped Jane away from what had been happy thoughts of wedding plans and honeymoons...
Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:08 am Post
LeeSalter999 wrote:Jane felt the passion within her increase as Josh moved a hand to her bottom and squeezed a buttock gently. Life could not be better.
Floss wrote:As a fan of primarily black ops stories
LeeSalter999 wrote:It was a first draft and worthy of some brutal criticism.
Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:43 am Post
pigfender wrote:No it wasn't. If these were the first words written for the first draft of your first attempt, then you should be really encouraged.
leesalter999 wrote:Blade bounded off in pursuit as Josh launched the stick ahead, barking loudly as he disappeared down the far side of a small hill up ahead.
leesalter999 wrote:Blade bounded off in pursuit as Josh launched the stick forward, barking loudly as he disappeared down the far side of a small hill up ahead.
Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:15 am Post
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