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by Shadowspawn
Mon Oct 12, 2020 9:12 am
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: On Your Honor (NiaD X)
Replies: 20
Views: 1361

Re: On Your Honor (NiaD X)

I am Chapter Ten in the Yellow book, by the way.
As I'm new to this whole thing, and English in not my native language, would appreciate any kind of feedback.
As I plan to continue writing in English to publish my dream project eventually
by Shadowspawn
Sun Oct 11, 2020 9:40 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: On Your Honor (NiaD X)
Replies: 20
Views: 1361

Re: On Your Honor (NiaD X)

It feels like I would've benefited (or my chapter) if I knew the other events that already passed. For example, I pondered about mentioning a fling between Danny and Alice but I decided against it, and if I knew about the preliminary events around Scott, that fling could be an organic fit in the who...
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 11:45 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Getting down to reading,!

One more newbie question: the colors - are they different only in who wrote or also some parts of the script were different?
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 11:28 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

pigfender wrote:All books are compiled! Just uploading now!

Looking forward to reading!
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 9:16 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Now I'm anxious to see whether Otis Johnson makes it to President with Angela Bennett his pick for VP and Tom Bennett his FLOTUS. Or maybe that's not the point of the story... or the genre... Never mind, I'll get my X badge and that's all that matters. Thanks Rog for another enervating Saturday. Th...
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 8:18 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

I wonder how many different iterations of "representatives of the Comptroller's office" did Mr. Cole meet over the course of the novel? :mrgreen:

Hope less than 66...
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 7:46 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Sent Thanks for extra time! Newbie here, and started later than I thought. It seemed like not fun at first given the nature of the chapter (that's why my first intent was to have some fun with a massacre or an outright orgie to spice things up). But then I decided to stay closer to Eearth. Let's see...
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 12:22 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Can I ask about political allegiance of Mr. Cole? Could the Mayor have switched to Republicans?
by Shadowspawn
Sat Oct 10, 2020 10:38 am
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Just a newbie question: it doesn't state it in my brief but what if the characters (or some of them) do not survive by the end of a chapter or turn out to be some alien cannibal frogs (thanks for that image, by the way, it won't leave my head now) - is it overstepping too much?
by Shadowspawn
Fri Oct 09, 2020 6:30 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Phew, thanks!

Looking forward to it!
by Shadowspawn
Fri Oct 09, 2020 3:07 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Hope I wasn't too late :(
Am I in?
by Shadowspawn
Thu Oct 08, 2020 4:02 pm
Forum: Novel in a Day
Topic: NiaD X
Replies: 325
Views: 19307

Re: NiaD X

Hi all

I want in!