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by SConstance
Tue May 29, 2012 2:35 am
Forum: And Now For That Latte
Topic: NSFW: Words used for genitals in fanfic
Replies: 18
Views: 1353

Re: NSFW: Words used for genitals in fanfic

Words I know used for female genitals:

Cunny
Cunt
Sex
Vagina
Vagoo
Vag
Sex pot
Honey pot
Tunnel
Heat
Slit
Pussy

Some others might be, though offensive:
Baby factory
Fish barrel
Poon
Bacon and eggs
by SConstance
Tue May 29, 2012 1:45 am
Forum: I'm a writer!
Topic: Re-writing an old story
Replies: 7
Views: 1384

Re: Re-writing an old story

Thanks for the feedback, I've taken two of the of's out so it should help, as well as some other editing. I'll repost what i have changed when I get home. There should be a significant difference though I only threw out about 50 words.
by SConstance
Mon May 28, 2012 9:51 pm
Forum: I'm a writer!
Topic: Re-writing an old story
Replies: 7
Views: 1384

Re: Re-writing an old story

A hook has never been my issue, one of the few things I think I do right. But the selection and use of adverbs, adjectives, verbs, and my lack of control with run-on sentences has long been an issue for me.

Also, I've intentionally not said anything to describe the main character yet.
by SConstance
Sun May 27, 2012 1:18 am
Forum: And Now For That Latte
Topic: NSFW: Words used for genitals in fanfic
Replies: 18
Views: 1353

Re: NSFW: Words used for genitals in fanfic

I loves the one near the bottom for Loki's ass. That was my fav scene in the Avengers movie.
by SConstance
Sat May 26, 2012 6:49 pm
Forum: I'm a writer!
Topic: Re-writing an old story
Replies: 7
Views: 1384

Re-writing an old story

I'm rewriting a story that I started, but never finished, in high school, some ten or so years ago. The pacing of the story was off though the matter of the story was engrossing enough for one of my teachers to take the time and miss his lunch break reading it, even though it was only ten or so page...