Fri Sep 09, 2016 8:55 am Post
Fri Sep 09, 2016 12:16 pm Post
With! Definitely with. Risqué is good!! Go for it.Jonglin wrote:I just like short direct sentences - but one man's goose is another man's gander - with or without sauce -
Which you use to good effect in, Love at First Sight. But, young fella, isn't that, effect, enhanced by your use of other sentences of varying lengths? That, I think, is the essence of our kicking around the short vs long topic.Jonglin wrote:I just like short direct sentences
Fri Sep 09, 2016 12:51 pm Post
It does, indeed. Didn't listen to it at first, was afraid some poor voice artist had been forced to make sense of Papa's 400+ meandering stream of un-consiousness. Suppose that the two examples, back-to-back proves that no-one is perfect, not even Hem.vic-k wrote:Approaching the debate from a simple, common sense perspective ... don't we all communicate with short/intermediate/long sentences? Why then, would we not wish to spin our tales in the same fashion.
The audio excerpt makes the point splendidly: http://www.simonandschuster.com/books/G ... 1476787589 me thinks
Fri Sep 09, 2016 1:30 pm Post
Sat Sep 10, 2016 10:39 am Post
Jonglin wrote:I just like short direct sentences - but one man's goose is another man's gander - with or without sauce - so let's enjoy the wonderful mishmash of so many different ways of writing. I once read an awfully long sentence, with so many subordinate clauses, that ended with the world onions, repeated four times - and it all made perfect sense! I think it appears in The End of the World News, by Anthony Burgess.
Tue Sep 13, 2016 3:04 pm Post
Jazzy Jeff and the Fresh Prince wrote:Now this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down
And I'd like to take a minute
Just sit right there
I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town called Bel-Air
In west Philadelphia born and raised
On the playground was where I spent most of my days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
And all shooting some b-ball outside of the school
When a couple of guys who were up to no good
Started making trouble in my neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my mom got scared
She said, "You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel-Air."
I begged and pleaded with her day after day
But she packed my suitcase and sent me on my way
She gave me a kiss and then she gave me my ticket.
I put my Walkman on and said, "I might as well kick it."
First class, yo, this is bad
Drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass.
Is this what the people of Bel-Air living like?
Hmm, this might be alright.
But wait I hear they're prissy, bourgeois, all that
Is this the type of place that they just send this cool cat?
I don't think so
I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air
Well, the plane landed and when I came out
There was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out
I ain't trying to get arrested yet
I just got here
I sprang with the quickness like lightning, disappeared
I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said "Fresh" and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I could say that this cab was rare
But I thought, "Nah, forget it."
– "Yo, home to Bel-Air."
I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the cabbie, "Yo home smell ya later."
I looked at my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel-Air
Sat Oct 22, 2016 9:37 am Post
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